Running is more mental than it is physical [degree]. For many
the hardest part is just getting out the door. If you can get your feet onto
the pavement then the whole world opens up before you. [Antecedents/Consequence]
Many people dislike running because it is painful, difficult
or uncomfortable. It pushes you to
limits, both physical and mental. Just
as under-going surgery is painful and taxing, we know that it is beneficial as
well as sometimes very necessary. [Comparison]
A child learning to walk cannot do so without falling down, getting
scrapes and bruises. But the outcome of
those painful circumstances serves a greater purpose. Unlike basketball, tennis or skiing that
require specific venues, equipment or seasons, running can be enjoyed anytime,
anywhere, and without specialty equipment. [Possible/impossible] There are other
elements to running that make it beneficial.
It teaches will power, consistency, vision, and effort. [Whole/parts] In spite of, or perhaps because of, these
many elements of running, it also makes up something more.
Running has long been an avenue of physical fitness, mental
strength, and character building. [Definition]
The Ancient Greeks included it in their pursuits of becoming “citius,
altius, fortius” or swifter, higher, and stronger. [Maxim/Proverb] In our day
it continues to help us in these pursuits. [Past/Future fact] In my opinion becoming “higher” makes running
a spiritual matter, as it helps me to gain mastery over the natural man and
strengthens my soul. [Supernatural]
When I read this, it flowed so well that if you hadn't put the topics of invention into brackets on the side, I wouldn't have thought anything of it, besides it just being a solid argument. Knowing that you used them (specifically for argument's sake, like we were supposed to, it makes me more wary of accepting it (simply because I like to be defiant and not let people coerce me into anything). But like I said, it was very convincing and flowing, so much that I almost forgot that you were using those techniques. Sorry if the comment is jumbled... I can't seem to word it well. Basically, it's a compliment.
ReplyDeleteDo you have a running partner? You could quote them about how they feel after a run for a [witness] topic of invention. Or you could reference Runner's World Magazine for an [authority] topic of invention.
ReplyDeleteYour opening line and use of degree was captivating for me. I think what your you brought to mind in this statement was clever, because it made think that the mental side of running was a factor.
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