Katie descriptively drew the line between a teacher's clear but not condescending language in a high school English class. The same care should be taken when the teacher communicates with parents in both written and verbal form.
Written Style:
Email ensures a quick and easy way for teachers to contact the parents of struggling students. When Mrs. Nelson needs to inform a mother about her son's frequent absences and failing grades, she observes the norms of "English teacher" style. She is sure to use correct grammar, express her argument clearly, and add a touch of ornateness to make the difficult message sound a little more pleasing. She does not personally know James's mother. Mrs. Nelson avoids a condescending or accusatory tone by using figurative language like parallelism (to place herself and the parent on the same level of concern for James), and anacoenosis (asking the opinion of the audience). After reviewing James's grades, Mrs. Nelson writes the following:
Hello Mrs. Tucker,
I have the pleasure of teaching your son, James, in my English class. He is respectful and very kind to other students.
Unfortunately, I am aware of frequent absences and unexplained late work from him. Do you feel concerned about his performance in this class? Like you, I care for the well-being of your son. Literacy will be an essential skill throughout his life, and I worry that he is not taking full advantage of the opportunity to learn it now. I believe you would do anything in your power to provide him with a positive future. I hope you believe that I will do all in my power to help him, too, to improve his reading, writing, and critical thinking abilities.
Thank you,
Mrs. Nelson
I enjoyed your post and thought you did a wonderful job using both the written and verbal forms. My post is similar but I used the example of communicating with a limited English speaking parent. I liked that you used different rhetorical terms to describe exactly what the teacher would use to gain ethos and help her student. Great post!
ReplyDeleteI like how you brought up the importance of using a passive voice in the email so it doesn't sound condescending to the parent. You did a great job with your mini case studies, I enjoyed reading them!
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