Dr. Bahr is a psychologist at the Utah State Prison. Her
style in this setting is always very professional. She dresses in professional
work attire, calls people by “Mr.” and “Mrs.” and tries to refrain from sharing
anything personal. She works with inmates and then has to type up observational
and behavioral notes on the inmates as documentation of the interaction. In her
notes, she has to be very careful not to make any biased remarks that could
color other professional’s decisions about the inmate, as these notes will
likely go to the Board of Pardons, other therapists and case workers. These
notes could impact future decisions about the inmate- whether his completion of
therapy assignments shows progress and empathy, or whether he will serve the
full ten years of his five-to-ten year sentence. Everything about the
observational notes needs to be descriptive and thorough. The whole interaction
is very professional and structured.
Mr._____
was very vocal in therapy today. When another inmate read his assignment about
the person he victimized, Mr. _____ asked how he thinks his victim is feeling
now, after the fact. This is in line with the assignment Mr. _____ is working
on, which is victim empathy. He made several other comments that showed insight
into the assignments and was able to adequately explain concepts to the other
men in the group. He showed initiative by commenting without being prompted
too. Outside of group, he has completed every assignment, stayed out of fights,
and has obeyed all rules.
This letter is very direct, with observational notes and without biased statements, such as “I think it’s doing well” and “he seemed confused.” This type of writing is very characteristic of psychologists because it gives facts instead of assertions.
This letter is very direct, with observational notes and without biased statements, such as “I think it’s doing well” and “he seemed confused.” This type of writing is very characteristic of psychologists because it gives facts instead of assertions.
In conversation, Dr. Bahr would be likely to be very general in her statements, as to not lead certain answers. She would guide conversation with questions to generate thought, without prompting the clients. She would build rapport by validating statements, being unbiased, and rephrasing the client’s words to show she was listening. Here is an example of a person-to-person conversation:
Client: When I committed my crime, I was just thinking
that it wasn’t so bad. I grew up with this kind of treatment, so it seemed
normal to me. I didn’t really think I was harming anyone.
Psychologist: So, you didn’t realize it was wrong? What do you think now? How do you think what you did actually affected the person you victimized? What do you think (spoken to other clients in the group)?
Psychologist: So, you didn’t realize it was wrong? What do you think now? How do you think what you did actually affected the person you victimized? What do you think (spoken to other clients in the group)?
I didn't realize just how important the ability to differentiate fact from assertion is. I think so many fields require this ability. I know mine does in regards to therapy evaluation and assessments. But for these inmates, their fate really does depend on the social worker's ability to make a clear representation of fact (whether they get the short or long end of their sentence).
ReplyDeleteIt is indeed interesting to note that in some cases the key to proper style is the lack thereof. In a job where clarity is everything and personality must be omitted, a calm and non-judgmental point of view is key for an accurate use of rhetoric. Excellently put.
ReplyDeleteI agree with these last two posts. For some reason, this post allows one to see more fully the effect that rhetoric can play. At times I have thought it is more important just to be influential which is true but it can be more than that. Sometimes rhetoric is so important that if some aspects of it is not used, terrible results may occur. It sounds like a challenging but very rewarding job. Very interesting insight.
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