Tuesday, November 17, 2015

Biblical Eloquence in Proverbs 4:23–27

Proverbs 4:23–27

 23 Keep thy heart with all diligence; for out of it are the issues of life.
 24 Put away from thee a froward (perverse) mouth, and perverse lips put far from thee.
 25 Let thine eyes look right on, and let thine eyelids look straight before thee.
 26 Ponder the path of thy feet, and let all thy ways be established.
 27 Turn not to the right hand nor to the left: remove thy foot from evil.


A main rhetorical element I see in these verses is the trope synecdoche. Solomon specifically references various parts of an individual: heart, mouth, lips, eye, eyelids, feet, hands. Each of these body parts are supposed to do something, but really, the whole person has to make the changes—not just the body part. For example “removed thy foot from evil” doesn’t mean just the foot should leave evil. The whole person must leave evil.

Another element is chiasmus, which is used in the structure reverse in verse 24. This arrangement differs from the parallelism of the rest of the verses (basically: verb, noun [part], preposition, noun). That shift adds emphasis to that particular message.

The different body parts also have symbolic meanings, like the eyes in verse 25. While they can literally look forward, the message is symbolic. Some other elements are alliteration and ellipsis.

3 comments:

  1. I feel this could be a great example of subject/adjuncts. While Solomon focuses on different body parts (as you mentioned) his main concern is the body itself.

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  2. This is an interesting concept that is used a lot in literature. I've been studying early English sonnets recently and they employ a similar device in referring to different parts of the body through pieces (blazon).

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  3. Interesting breakdown. I wonder if these verses would count as effictio (a verbal depiction of someone's body, often from head to toe).

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