Audience

Context
There are a few stereotypes about engineers: Smart, nerdy, and very awkward. I want to address the importance of effective
communication with others, especially with those from other fields. Many great ideas fall flat because nobody
with authority caught onto the vision.
Rhetoric
Mechanical engineers need to learn art of persuasion. It should manifest itself most often in group
settings where a decision has to be made, such as whether or not to fund a
project, or to grant access to lab equipment, etc. A deliberative approach is appropriate in
most situations, where the engineer emphasizes the advantages and disadvantages
of a certain issue. This can be
delivered in writing, or by oration.
Understanding the figures of reasoning is very important.
History
I mentioned previously how the mechanical engineering major offers
very little historical context to this field.
I want to show how an understanding of how developments in the past were
made can inspire the innovations of today.
Development Plan
I will start this paper off
by addressing the importance of understanding the historical context of
mechanical engineering. This is more about reading up, or learning the
subject before communicating it. First I
want to define what the field is and what it encompasses. There is a little more research that has to
be done for that. Then I want to give a
few examples of how being aware of past and present issues can lead to
intuition and new ideas. My blog post
from Dec. 3 gives a good example of the development of prosthetics. This section can be rounded off with a
pathetic approach to show the joy an engineer experiences once he or she
recognizes a topic that can be improved upon.
The
elation of discovery can quickly be crushed by awkwardness. At this point it would be powerful to show
how ineffective communication squanders dreams for mechanical engineers. I can give an example of Dilbert, the classic
engineer stereotype. This comes from my
Oct. 24 blog post. After this, I can
expound on the areas of communication that are experienced in the field and how
to succeed. Communication between an
engineer and those from other fields is a crucial element to success. From my Nov. 7 blog post I can give examples
of what to say and how to say it. The
last half of this paper is primarily concerned with persuasion.
I like your development plan; start by getting people excited about the field that they are probably already at least slightly interested in and then warning them about the potential difficulties they may run into if they do not learn from the communication advice available in your paper. I think that will work very nicely.
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